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I haven't reviewed in a while and I want to get back into it. The only thing I won't review is poetry. I am the worst poet in the world ...

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A few times today when I've gone to review some novels that have been put on my WRFF thread I've found that I can't because they're locked. I was just ...

I feel like I'm a bit late to join in on this, but I love religious debates, so I'll put in my two cents anyway. I'll make it short. I ...

I can't deny that this is a unique way of telling the story. But what I can say is that I don't think it's working. Like the last chapter, I ...

I know I've said this before in a previous review, but I really think this story is taking a turn for the unrealistic. The bits of emotion that you portray ...

I'm not a huge fan of this. Mostly because of where it is in the book. I don't really think this deserves its own chapter, especially this far into the ...

You start out nearly every chapter with a description of scenery. As well-written as it is, it gets old fast. A reader's favourite part is almost never description of scenery. ...

I feel bad for doing this, but I don't really have anything to critique. I don't see any errors in this whatsoever, you've really done a good job. The only ...

My breathing was intermittent, my heart rate exceeding its sustainable tempo of normalcy I don't exactly know how to say this, but this sentence is almost too much. The word ...