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The bus screeched to a stop and four younger kids hopped off laughing and smiling. This is all happening much too fast. They only just pulled away from the school, ...

She rushed to her scrap basket and pricked herself on a needle she had neglected to put away , but felt no pain. Blood seeped through a rag as she ...

Immediately, I can see that this is very chunky. It has long paragraphs, which can be a turn-off at first glance. But I'm going to give it the benefit of ...

I would change this to a 16+ rating, based on the bits of foul language you used. “I don’t understand you anymore, how can you live with what you did?!” ...

I was out in the hallway, pacing up and down and trying to calm myself down. Breathe. Don’t cry, don’t cry. That’s precisely what she wants you to do. I ...

I read this entire thing with a straight face. I'm going to be straight-forward here and say that this was very childish, and not funny at all. I'm not sure ...

I suppose it would be the cliché thing to say that she smiled like the sun. That she lit up every room she walked into, and that her eyes shone ...

A young girl of round ivory underneath a rosy sheen and painted lips sat at a medium sized table Right off the bat, you lost me. A girl of round ...

I finished attaching the note and let the balloon float out to the end of its string. It tugged and jerked wildly in the autumn breeze, I don't think that ...

Well, get to it then mister.

She feared if she called out she would only draw the things attention, *thing's Things is the plural of thing, thing's is possessive. Emily’s eye’s slipped closed, *eyes Finely , ...

Look Out Of The Window. Can You See The Sea? Look Out Of The Window. Can You See The Future? Look Out Of The Window (period) Can You See The ...

Wow. I'm not really religious, and I'm quite clueless when it comes to these things, but this was beautiful. I almost wish that it was longer, but maybe the short ...

Review your hearts out, darlings. Sylvester Carefully, so I don’t wake the sleeping humans, I trudge downstairs for a drink of water. The house is so peaceful at night. Though, ...

All that was left was a mess from strangers who’s come here for shelter. *who'd The shadows are tugging at my body, and they’re scraping my skin. Towards the hurricanes. ...