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I should really review earlier tomorrow, I'm sick of reviewing after SmylinG, I feel like I'm just repeating what she says, but in a worse way. Anyways: I had to ...

Sorry that it's taking so long to review these, been so busy with school and whatnot. But I have some time now, so let's do this (insert s word here, ...

“I don’t think so, Ross, (period) C an I call you Ross?” around here, a face like that you don’t forget in a hurry. Worded a bit awkwardly. “I know ...

Day two of reviewing this story, woop. I actually read about 4 more chapters this morning while I was doing my hair, but I didn't have time to write reviews, ...

I'm not gonna lie, I read your spoiler and I'm hoping that this isn't too Stephen King-like. I find his characters to be rather dry and boring. The c lock ...

Flying It wasn’t a hard decision. Once I had the idea, it made so much sense that I barely had to think twice about it. Jump or suffocate. When pressed ...

I agree with you. The story of Flight 93, while a great tragedy, is an inspiring tale. It's always what tugs in the back of my mind when I think ...

I was working up on the 88th floor; only one or two floor s below where the plane crashed. The plane in the South Tower actually crashed below the 88th ...

I agree with perdido, the person in this looks headless. It's a bit of a turnoff. I'm not a huge photographer myself, but I know what type of pictures appeal ...

Every day she has sat by the fire, her tired eyes straining as her scarred finger s stitch the patterns. It helped her focus on the work, and the physical ...

I love stories in second person - in my opinion there should be more. Particularly more like this one. Your writing was wonderful. Just enough description to get a good ...

I have a feeling that this review is mostly going to be nitpicks, I hope you're okay with that. Nitpicks is what I do best, really. Joseph watched Jacob (comma) ...

I really liked this. I've been seeing so many poems lately that overuse repetition, and I'm glad to finally see one that didn't. This is the type of poem that ...

Ariana raised her cup to her lips, sipping gently at the steaming liquid that swished and curled rapidly as she set it gently on the mahogany table. This is a ...

The writing immediately looks chunky to me. This is a huge turn-off, but your story seems promising, so I shall read on anyways. Alice was falling. The rabbit hole had ...