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I think the leaf in the fence would have looked better if you had focused on the leaf rather than the fence. The other one if mediocre, nothing that blows ...

Okay, I'm going to give this a shot. I will warn you, I've never reviewed an essay before. I'll look at it from a reader's perspective. As if I just ...

I was trying to figure out who your writing style reminded me of, and it hit me. Ellen Hopkins. I don't know if you read her stuff, but it has ...

Banned for being a bad influence

You can take anything I say in whichever way you'd like. If you don't agree with something I've changed, don't feel like you have to change it. Summer was packing ...

This guy is right in the middle

Hey, you, listen up. I don't usually write poems, it's not really my thing, but I felt like writing one anyways. Why not, right? I doubt there will be many ...

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Good evening. I think I'll start with nitpicks: I’ve always been a ‘the glass is half full ' sort of person (comma) but its hard to be optimistic when your ...

There really isn't anything to nitpick, this is written really well. Just this: the blood - thirsty hounds leapt from the dark forest that surrounded their home. The ir father’s ...

If I make any changes to the story, take them as suggestions. Punctuation errors should probably be changed though. The anaesthetic should have long worn off already (period) ” With ...

Hey, how's it going. I'm going to start with nitpicks: “Is someone else there?” s he croaked. “I’m here, (period instead) ” The gruff voice made her jump. “I didn't ...

Just by glancing at this, I can already tell that there will be many errors. The long, chunky writing doesn't appeal to anyone, and I would suggest breaking it into ...

I find that the name of the character isn't that important. Of course, don't name your character something crazy, but I don't think picking out a name should be a ...

I think your opinion is biased. You'll never have to make that choice, so you can say what you want about it, but you'll never really know. That's not to ...