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:arrow: yeh the blood part is still going through the "fix" lol thanks though, thats what i'm aiming for, the whole gripping your attention thing.

awosme....i can almost see her, her eyes are a big part though, i always notice the eyes... "windows to the soul"lol :shock:

'And this was as if gold was dangling in front on his face. " i thought sentances were never too start with "And" maybe i'm wrong but i really liked ...

exactly, a girl just gets freacked out and finds out she's crazy.lol :lol:

:arrow: she is a SHE and she's got a split personality sort-off i'm not sure really. i just wrote it to get it out. that's one of my weaknessess other ...