cnhanifin

yay for chopin! you have such a great grasp of dialogue, the conversation really flowed and had a really organic quality to it. i also really liked the dark humor ...

its a creative idea. i liked the line about entering a room of sanity in contrast to the way the bride must be feeling, crazy for feeling like something is ...

Such a nice poem! I love the subject and the description of rain. It's one of my favorite things to listen to. Some of the lines could flow more easily ...