cmarie159

Thanks for all the positive feedback! I'm not quite sure what you meant by me changing voices here, it would be great if you elaborate. and I will definitely try ...

hey this was really good! The story was great, and I want to read more! I wonder who Rossa is...? I know, cause I'm special. But everyone should use context ...

1) does it draw my attention? yes it does. it was very interesting, but the vocabulary was just a little bland. I think what drew me in the most was ...

[pre] You mock me. Oh yes, you mock me. Sitting there, showing the time. How you mock me. If you weren't on silent you would be laughing at me, perhaps ...

I think this poem is very completely awesome. Yeah, great grammar, right? I think it's easy to relate to, but uses nice vocabulary. It portrays emotion very well.

I liked this poem. It was creative and original. A little "emo" for my taste, but it expresses emotion in a way where the reader can feel what you're feeling, ...