cmarie159

Thanks for all who critiqued, or just bothered to read this. I realize this has no real "point", but I thought it was interesting. Okay, truth is I have to ...

thanks for all the critique! I really appreciate it. I'm sorry if my spelling is sometimes a little different, my Firefox spell check is in English, not English-American, so things ...

0.0 stares into a blank oblivion. totally reminiscent of a marshmallow war i wrote about last year. you are genius. marry me. [dear lord, your the third person i've asked ...

[Note: I know that the last 2 of my pieces have been in first person. That's been a change for me since I usually write in third person. While I'm ...

the narrator is not mentally disable. although she'd like to say she has never took ANY crazy test. =X ok now she's worried.

thanks for all the reviews! I didn't actually submit this to sci-fi, i submitted it to other, but somehow it got fudged up, haha. I realize that the font is ...

0.o This was way better than your last poem. Absolutely amazing. You would only get this if you have ever sat through a class with completely shallow people and you ...

My friend, you are amazing. No lie. I love you, I want you to marry me, too! =]

0.o wow. All I can say is wow. I agree with your concepts of religion completely, and the irony of the "Sunshine" song? Pure genius. Your vocabulary is absolutely SPECTACULAR! ...

I would love it if you reviewed "And Its Quite Lovely". When you get time =] thanks.

for the bump, not meaning to, but if you could, I would love some harsh critique, and maybe one positive thing about it? I'd really appreciate it! Thanks

I think this is pretty intelligent. It's witty, and makes you think "what exactly did that priest lie about? It's one of those that make you think. Like Ernest Hemingway's ...

I don't think the sun is going to literally kill them. Rather, it's the thought of staying in this world another day. They want the easy way out, or rather, ...

Staring at my cell phone, watching the minutes change slowly. They're dripping all over my hand, as slow as molasses. I take each minute, as it drips down, and put ...

I definitely think this story was amazing. It touched me on a personal level, since my grandfathers are actually gay, and it was really sweet. It really showed the innocence ...