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Thanks you Legy. I'm working on my second draft of this, which I'll take onward your opinions. After re reading this I've found that I agree with you. :)

Wow, thanks for the awesome review!

Thank you very much for your review, I really appreciate it. :)

True, thank you for the reply! You are a talented writer and I hoe to read more if your work. :P

That's Gravy! Stupid auto-correct...

Thanks, like part 1, your review helped me alot. :D

Thanks! This review was really helpful, I look forward to, reading some of your pieces!

It sounds great so far! I really like your style of writing, this piece is really interesting. I'll be sure to read your next chap! ~CM

Part 2 is up!

Part 2 is up!

Part 2 is up!

Part 2 is up!

Cool! Seems nice! Can't wait to read more, it's got heaps of potential.

Thanks heaps! You made my day with this review and I'll be sure to post Part 2 soon :)

Thanks heaps! You made my day with this review and I'll be sure to post Part 2 soon :)