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I'm sorry, but I have to deny your request. I was immediately drawn away from this because of the scene. I have read SO many poems of hate, anger, chaos, ...

Much better! I read it again and I like it even better than the first time. =) Well done, I like the changes you made. On the subject of nuzzly ...

if you're gonna post anything here, it might as well be serious.

I am in love with your poem. So much. Just had to let you know. Amazingness. Alright, review time. Official review----- 1. New title. I think this poem is so ...

amen.^

Hehe... grey ghost your review made me laugh. lilchoma, thank you for the review-even if it doesn't get the the point specifically, it's always nice to get an overall feeling ...

Okay. So now for the serious one. No offence meant by what I am about to say. well, there sits a man ---okay, first of all, you NEED to use ...

um. well.....interesting concept...? i acctually really like it, but its shallow, lacking in a point, and very amuzing. love it. =D (wait...why do they die if they dont dance???) oh, ...

As everyone has stated, the "th'"s are reallly unfitting. As Suzanne pointed out, working on a poem for more than two minutes is almost common curtouesy. Take a little more ...

This is the story of a person with a canyon made inside themselves, and they are struggling on whether they should cross the canyon or continue to shut out their ...

Working on a poem! I am looking for a review that will totally rip it apart so it will be the best it can be. it's called unobserved. please shred! ...

hahahahaha that was so dumb.

he he he he.

I think so. Maybe. Yes, I think it is. It's a story. About a girl. Joey was right about the little boy holdin on to his life...where does he fit ...

In the U.S.A. huge ammounts of people do illegal drugs. But think about this- if the United States legalized cocaine, crack, marijuana, etc. how many more people would do it? ...