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  • Other Poetry Re: A Telegram

    This looks a lot cooler on Word; I have it in Courier New so it actually kind of looks like a telegram...but I'm too technologically challenged to figure out how ...

    Oct 24, 2010
  • Dramatic Poetry Re: Light As a Feather

    I enjoyed the repetition you used when you were knocking on the door and the progressive way that the knocking became more and more. I would have enjoyed some imagery ...

    Oct 24, 2010
  • Dramatic Poetry Re: Marks

    I like this, for sure. It definitely has some relation to what I'm sure almost everyone has wanted to do at one point. I got a little confused on the ...

    Oct 23, 2010
  • Dramatic Poetry Re: Freckles

    Overall, very cute and very loving. It strikes a place with my own freckled face. I appreciate the way you bring that topic that we hear so many times to ...

    Oct 23, 2010
  • Lyric Poetry Re: Too Tired to Sleep

    A poem I wrote after my family's dog of 15 years died. Why do people sigh as they pass you by? You only just wonder why. Why do they cry? ...

    Oct 23, 2010
  • Lyric Poetry Re: All is temporary [EDITED]

    I agree. I like the tackling of this subject and your approach to this--how you can find the funny side of things and also the way that it's just plain ...

    Oct 23, 2010


Perhaps when we find ourselves wanting everything, it is because we are dangerously close to wanting nothing.
— Sylvia Plath