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  • Lyric Poetry Re: antidisestablishmentarianism

    We'll stand up to the boss and throw shit at his feet Forget corporate America; the great and unattainable, all American Dream Come away with me We will have a ...

    Jul 17, 2009
  • Dramatic Poetry Re: Catching Wind

    This is beautifully written. I love the fingers grasping at "everything and nothing." The only thing that bothered me the slightest bit was the "What" in "What are you against ...

    Jul 17, 2009
  • Other Poetry Re: This Stupid Crush

    I like this poem! The title is awesome. Your choice of length in the lines is interesting. I wonder if you mean to convey doubt about getting involved with this ...

    Jul 4, 2009
  • Other Re: Philosopher's influence on today's democracy

    The Philosophers That Shaped Today’s Free World The United States as we know it today would not exist if it was not for the influence of the great philosophers during ...

    May 15, 2009
  • Dramatic Poetry Re: Confessions of a college student

    Thank you so much for commenting on the poem. I live for constructive criticism, so you can feel free to rip my works to shreds if you feel it needs ...

    Apr 27, 2009
  • Other Poetry Re: Edward Cullen

    So I am a big twilight fan myself, and I like the poem over all. Especially the descriptions of him watching over you as you sleep, and the walks in ...

    Apr 26, 2009
  • Dramatic Poetry Re: Daddy, I love you

    I love this poem!! The imagery is amazing! I love the first stanza about the night sky and the star in your eye. I also love "As I look at ...

    Apr 26, 2009
  • Dramatic Poetry Re: Don't Know What Love Is

    Loved the poem!! I'm sure most teens can relate, and you described it very well. The same thoughts have flashed through my own head countless times.

    Apr 25, 2009
  • Dramatic Poetry Re: Confessions of a college student

    What happens to students between high school and college? Is there some manual on how to behave on campus That I just didn't receive? Why is binge drinking the college ...

    Apr 25, 2009


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— L.M. Montgomery, Anne of Green Gables