-
Re: Goodbye Mom
Dang, Flow... *applauds* No review. Good job. -Clay
Jan 14, 2011 -
Re: No Poetry?
Thanks for all the reviews, guys...the feedback's been great. I appreciate it. :) If you all don't care, let me know what you think about this... Do what's right, sir, ...
Jan 14, 2011 -
Re: Cyborg
I enjoyed reading this...it's in a neat style. A neat style, a neat concept within the style. It's amazing that so few words can be used without sacrificing content. You ...
Jan 14, 2011 -
Re: No Poetry?
The other day I tried to get into as a writer. When they requested some of my work, they limited me to nonfiction, specifically stating, "No poetry."...I didn't like that ...
Jan 14, 2011 -
Re: Love & Lust
Thanks for the advice. I wasn't trying to invoke any emotions. This is a piece that I wrote a while back. It really has no intentions at all, actually. Other ...
Jan 12, 2011 -
Re: Suitor
Wow, this is a beautiful piece of writing. I love it because of all the meaning hidden throughout. I say hidden because I had to read it several times to ...
Jan 11, 2011 -
Re: Engulfed By My Flames
This has a nice flow to it. I like it, up to a certain point. I don't understand the last two stanzas very well, or, really, just the first first ...
Jan 11, 2011 -
Re: Love & Lust
Thanks. :) I appreciate it. The best stuff comes from the things you live through. Thanks again! -Clay
Jan 11, 2011 -
Re: Love & Lust
Love Strikes at the heart Knows it's part In life Love Fears no thing Wears a ring And carries on through strife Love's fine and dandy If you said your ...
Jan 11, 2011
