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Dear, Mr. Shade, you already know I have some "mer mer mer"s about this. There were parts of it that I really liked, but we already know your strengths as ...

I suppose I don't have much to say, you should already understand that this is a well written and excellent work. I haven't perfected the art of reviewing but I ...

When I read something like this, I recognize the league I play in. I just wanted to let you know of that little factor. Someday I will attempt to critique ...

I love the sudden twist between the second to last and last stanza. It's sort of mopey and then turns vengeful. I would really like it though if you would ...

I've decided that I could critique this one, because I have what I've already read to compare it to. I hope nobody is reading this beside you, but they are. ...

Hey, it's nice to be reading something like this. Now lets get down to business on critiquing. The theme is strong and has a nice through-line. But, I am going ...