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Re: The Wolf
I dont really know if the number of synonyms followed sonnet outlines, but I dont really care about that haha. Good imagery and I liked the flow of the poem. ...
May 26, 2010 -
Re: Prisons
The diction is very plain and I can't really imagine anything going on. The few descriptions you do have are too 'literal' (if that makes any sense) and could use ...
May 26, 2010
