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Re: Smile
Yeah, I know what you mean. It just makes it creeper that there’s a thunderstorm going on out there tonight. All I noticed was for creeper to be creepier* Other ...
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Re: Wish
I just found a few small errors I wish all the laughter at my humore woukd still be there for woukd just to be would and for humore i'm not ...
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Re: The American Dream- Chapter 3
I love the variety of words your used to describe everything in this chapter. I really hope you finish the story because the sample of it above is great! The ...
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Re: Stolen Life
Thank you Yuriiko for your reply and thank you everyone else. In my story when Miriam had her brother taken away she tried to fight back but when they took ...
Jun 26, 2011 -
Re: Work in Progress?
I really liked all of the lyrics :) The rhyming seemed to flow well. My favorite lines are You never knew how I felt about you Because you never knew, ...
Jun 26, 2011 -
Re: Most Recent (:
Really amazing photos! #1 - This still life kind of shot is really pretty and has really great detail #2 - This photo is really interesting but is so hard ...
Jun 25, 2011 -
Re: Dance
I love this poem! It is really creative and the words you used really draw me in. I really agree with everything your poem is about and think you expressed ...
Jun 25, 2011 -
Re: I Can Tell When I'm Not Wanted
I love your style of writing! Every verse flows so well and the topic really captured my attention; I am sure that everyone has felt like that before. Felt unwanted. ...
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Re: Mental Scars
For everything good and bad that we experience... endure.jpg So let go.. let go 2.jpg Let go of everything negative you've ever been told. lies.jpg mask.jpg Becuase.. never too late.jpg ...
Jun 25, 2011 -
Re: Stolen Life
My stolen life All that I was aware of were the hot tears rolling down my cheeks, and my sanity slipping away. I have no idea who I am. I ...
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