ciago92

short, very short. has potential though, liking the sister/sister bit. Hope you expand that in the next chapter can't wait to see the next one

thank you for all your suggestions, will consider. I have to reply to Amelia: it wasn't a turnaround from suicidal to happy, it was just a "I can't give up ...

This is an...interesting story. I'm not quite sure what all you're trying to convey...Maybe I'm missing something, but this confuses me. I *think* I like it, but you're going to ...

ya know, I don't think there is...there's this minor detail of: He wrote this almost two years ago. I dunno if he has others and just didn't post them here, ...

This is an interesting seems kind of short, but I guess it is an opener. You have some interesting possible plot lines going on, I would love to see you ...