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Greetings, I'm LastPaladin and I shall be your reviewer, I shall now explain right away I didn't like this, and I admit I can be rather harsh, but please don't ...

This is the one you showed me before! I'm sorry i laughed, i think it's really beautiful and flowing, and you have a truly special style. Of course, it makes ...

Her eyes are so cute! And her hair looks so..well anime-ish :P haha! Are you on DeviantArt?

I see it is longed for by others aswell. She recieves her happiness. Undeserving. I wait, patience slipping. Waiting for what will never be mine. Jealousy rears it's sickley head. ...

Leonie..I swear i'm going to blow a gasket..or casket,or whatever it is :P This is so, so lovley! I have no idea why, but it makes me think of Elvis ...

Yeah, spaces after all of your commas (, ) and periods (. ). Was it betrayed trust? Or a broken heart? Or was it open for interpretation? Or was it ...

Winged angel of the night, Fly into my nightly visions. Change the course of the path I set, As I sway in and out of conciousness. Take the first full ...

Great poem love your style! happy writing Thank you so much! I'm not really into poetry that much and it's rare that I attempt to write one. :P

This is beautiful . The emotion behind it is stunning and the imagery it just so striking. I love the rhyme,It adds a eerie aura to the poem. I love ...

Winged angel of the night, Fly into my nightly visions. Change the course of the path I set, As I sway in and out of conciousness. With sword in hand,you ...