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Re: Field of Flowers
I look around me Yellow, blue, green Colors flow like the sea This first part is lovely. I really enjoy this! Especially the comparison to the sea. Waving to and ...
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Re: Pain.
I jest at scars that bear sweet wounds. The wounds they seep, they seep. Mine heart in broken camouflage. My heart it weeps, it weeps .
Oct 28, 2010 -
Re: Silent tears
I stare at the white walls the silent tears drip from my face I look into the small mirror my face pale for not having seen the sun my light ...
Oct 27, 2010 -
Re: I wanted you more.
-.- God Almighty! Either laugh or don't laugh xD!! No, I don't think he does.. No, he would be severly creeped out!! I'm sure he has some cute gay boyfriend ...
Oct 25, 2010 -
Re: And the dark thoughts expand once again.
Leonie, I rememeber slightly what poem you are on about but I swear that I don't know where it is! If I knew, I would upload it!! I kind of ...
Oct 25, 2010 -
Re: School Romance?
You can deny it all you like Leonie, but the truth is *Sings* YOU WANT TO LOVE HIM! YOU WANT TO KISS HIM! YOU WANT TO HUG HIM! *Sings* Muhahaha!! ...
Oct 25, 2010 -
Re: School Romance?
WAHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!! I love this one! Was it Goulash that inspired you ;] ? Hah! But seriously I do love this poem!! Upload the one about No mans land! Chynel.
Oct 22, 2010 -
Re: And the dark thoughts expand once again.
Thanks Wondergirl! :3 If you don't mind my asking, why is it so frustrating? Yeah! I usually have the most insane amazing dreams and it sucks to wake up haha! ...
Oct 22, 2010 -
Re: And the dark thoughts expand once again.
Haha, I was on Deviant art when we were on the computers. Which poem did I not lose?
Oct 21, 2010 -
Re: And the dark thoughts expand once again.
So it was B1 who inspired you on this poem Chynel? Interesting. I didn't know you wrote about B1. Hand on heart, i didn't laugh, seriously. Like i said before, ...
Oct 17, 2010 -
Re: Water Nymph
I tread water. I let my tears wash into the sea, Salt with salt, And I remember you, You, swallowed by the heavy darkness, Taken by the sea. I curl ...
Oct 17, 2010 -
Re: I've Fallen For You
I was ready to leave, Nothing was what I'd ever achieve. My reflection painful to look at, My thighs always a little too fat, My dark taste brought on countless ...
Oct 17, 2010 -
Re: I wanted you more.
This was a good poem. I understand the emotions behind it completely. I'm sorry if this happened to you. It does hurt. You are a good writer and you seem ...
Oct 17, 2010 -
Re: I wanted you more.
Wow. This poem is so you. Its so good because its so different-thats not a bad thing. By the way, i'm not laughing as i'm saying this-i'm genuinely impressed. You ...
Oct 17, 2010 -
Re: I wanted you more.
Hi there, So from a technical standpoint, I am totally impressed with this poem. I've been translating the poetry of Sappho from Ancient Greek and your poem reminds me a ...
Oct 17, 2010
