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OK sureal, I think I've fixed the paragraphing, and he now has a name... Sadly, the name is Jones. Because of the alliteration. Thanks for all the comments!

Right. First off, this isn't original. Sorry. Also, you don't count to 100, you count to 100 several times, your rhymes are lame, and... just.... WHY????

Well thanks for everything... Claudette, I know we're not supposed to reply to crits, but hey: In my defence, only three of those words were adverbs, pearly is an adjective. ...

For the record, RADA stands for Royal Academy of Dramatic Art. It's an English dramatics it probably has no place in the story, but I couldn't think of another one ...

Done. That'll teach me to copy and paste straight from microsoft word... :D

I really like the imagery. However, the whole thing still sounds like it was co-written by your younger brother.

has anyone seen/listened to the musical? It's great, possibly not as good as the book but without a lot of the boring bits. We did some of the music in ...