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I really like the imagery. However, the whole thing still sounds like it was co-written by your younger brother.

How about commerical sell-outs? "I did it!" I cried, tears running down my cheeks like the fully-posable fire engines in my Trash Toys playset, available at most major retailers for ...

I think the problem with characters whose thoughts are always DEATH DEATH DEATH DESPAIR DEATH is that real people don't think like that. Whatever bad things happen, there'll always be ...

has anyone seen/listened to the musical? It's great, possibly not as good as the book but without a lot of the boring bits. We did some of the music in ...

I liked the style - and the way you used 'u' instead of 'you' at some points. I'm not sure if that was deliberate, but it makes the fact that ...

This is something I wrote whilst considering the flipside of teenage angst-ridden rebellion. Warning: contains Alcohol & Anarchy TITLE: It’s the little things in life… The man to Travis’ left, ...

I really liked it. In a weird way, it reminded me of puppets - the way you kept identifying the professor as only the professor and the boy as only ...

hi im new, second year of GCSE's. I would like to write seriously but my inner cynic keeps cutting in, so mainly I end up sounding like a watered-down version ...

I really liked his cat. I thought you portrayed his relationship with his pet (as a guy living alone) really well. As well, I though he was quite a believeable ...