christalynnalice

Thank you so much for the reviews and support, I am sorry to say that this story will not be finished as quickly as I would like for it to ...

Also @VousEsEtonnant , I'm not clear on what you mean...I am female and the whole piece is in my point of view, talking about the guy I'm dating. Were you ...

Thanks so much for the reviews. As for the run on scentence, that's what I intended, and I like the way you put it. "It makes the voice in my ...

I know that I seem incredibly weak in this piece, there are a lot of things going badly in my life, and I am the type of person who needs ...

I liked it a lot, two things though. You say "he" and"his" a lot, and seeing as this is a piece about fallen angels, I'm assuming you mean God or ...

Flash by for a moment(Even shorter, I mean) An instant (perhaps) Stepping Toe to toe with their fate. This line confused me a bit, it took me several times reading ...

This was very cool, reminds me of my friend Paul. Very well written, I liked it. Just wish it was a little longer, but all in all good =)

wow...just wow. I was raised in the church of God all my life, and this piece really stunned me, it's what a lot of people are thinking, what I've been ...

lol doxie thanks so much, I most definitely will continue writing.

Chapter 2- All downhill from here I waited for as long as possible to get dinner that night. When the apartment was all but dead quiet, I cracked open my ...

Thanks so much for the reviews, yeah, I know it's kind of a hot unedited mess right now, I hadn't really intended on letting anyone see it at all, but ...

This is too long to put in the description line, but I loved a girl in high school, named Angel. To any body who didn't know her, she was just ...

@Lauren2010 Thank you so much for your review =) I fixed the smaller mistakes just now, but I see what you mean about the talking heads thing, I may need ...

@snoink thank so much! I'm sorry, I don't want to give too much away, but Nate and Grace are just friends lol, but they are the very best of friends. ...

@Bivrax thank you =)