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I like it, too! I think perhaps you should add something contrasting want you're wishing for with what you actually get. Or "but you won't do that because..." Or "If ...

I love your theme, I wanted a little teensy-tiny bit more. It has a good feeling, it's not held back by rhymes or even syllable counts, even though you used ...

Thanks... I didn't want to give it any organization, that's how the words came out of my head (after watching over 75% of my friends perform in the last three ...

I would really appreciate it if you'd take the time to read the whole thing (I know it's long) and comment. Thanks! I see you on the stage. I clap, ...

Sorry, it got messed up when I pasted it in.

She stands there, on the green field, unsure of herself, trying to look like she’s confident, like she belongs there. She can’t think of any place she’d belong less, but ...

I felt like you were going for a certain emotion, but I got confused. I couldn't tell if you were trying to be somewhat sarcastic "This is how adults see ...

Granted. Their new air-mail service sends your movies flying through the window, one of them breaks your nose, another crashes into your mother's prized ceramic [vase, pot...], which she blames ...

I remembered something that bothered me! "Carlile" is actually spelled "Carlisle." Unless you've seen it that way somewhere else, I suggest you change it. It looks really wierd. And you ...

Granted, but you will never have anyone to share it with, and the children of the neighborhood TP your house on Halloween, tiptoe to the other side of the street ...

*whispers* You forgot to ask a question. I'll go back to Do you believe in God[s]? "Yes, I do. God is watching over me, he has a plan for me, ...

Granted, but now all your other shoes smell terrible, so you have to wear your fuzzy pink slippers outside to avoid people complaining about the smell. Your slippers only last ...

I appreciated Eragon, and it was a good story, but...not very original, and I honestly don't like Paolini's style. I saw everything coming long before it happened, even the SURPRISE! ...

Whoa...freakish...we joined on the same day! So I welcome both of us to the site (I feel rather unqualified to welcome someone who has been here the same amount of ...

Are you going to talk in Japanese? It bothers me... I'll just post you a purple elephant, promise to read your stuff, and ignore the Japanese. Or retaliate by calling ...