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Re: Panka
Honestly, I couldn't even see that as a children's song. Poetry is a form of expressing your emotions. This...poem...was dead. Completely void of emotion. Dull. Painful. No feeling. It didn't ...
Mar 7, 2007 -
Re: lunar eclipse, march 2007
Colleen, sfumato is a painting technique, developed by da Vinci. I'm not sure how it's done, but the end result is a smoky, misty image, with softer edges, blurred lines. ...
Mar 7, 2007 -
Re: Catharsis
The first two stanzas were all harsh. Harsh sounds, images, and ideas. The last part, with the gentle cherry blossoms, was soft and gentle. There was no transition. You went ...
Mar 7, 2007 -
Re: The Black Veil
"What?" Cassie was shocked. "No, it can't be! "It is, Cassie, I checked it several times. I know it's horrible, but that's the way it is. This is where they ...
Mar 7, 2007 -
Re: The Black Veil
I'm wondering why a female character is wearing a trenchcoat in the 1700's? :P Name: Cassandra (Cassie) Sex: Female Age: Sixteen Hair color/length: golden blonde, shoulder-length Eye color: Blazing gr
Mar 6, 2007 -
Re: Character Answer Game
Can I use my AIM one? IzzyBizzy76. Laugh all you like. :D Did you need the meaning? grandpa used to call me that, my friends still do. friend and I ...
Mar 5, 2007 -
Re: Running from yourself ((Whole))
Oh! This is my second time reading it, I just figured it out. Emily/Helen/Lily is schizophrenic, right? Multiple personalities/sees other people? It was very confusing, also "we're" has an apostrophe.
Mar 5, 2007 -
Re: The Edge of Forever
Wow...That was amazing! I agree, more about their culture, do they worship Destiny? How early do they have kids if everyone dies at eighteen? Is this another world, an ancient ...
Mar 5, 2007 -
Re: Sweet Home Alabama
Thank you. The contest is explained above. You write the opening chapter of a story, and, if you win (which I didn't), other people write the subsequent chapters. So it ...
Mar 5, 2007 -
Re: What color is the night sky?
You've never seen the night sky? I find that indescribably sad... An hour before dawn...The sky is absolutely pitch-black, tiny pinpoints of white light are the stars. The moon...that depends. ...
Mar 4, 2007 -
Re: Rapunzel
The way I interpreted it was that your male friend got himself a girlfriend, who refused to let you talk to your friend. Is that right? Something about this sounded ...
Mar 4, 2007 -
Re: Character Answer Game
"I would know that my family is safe, that...that behind bars (or dead), and never coming back." ~Isabella "I would know that I can go away and live somewhere else, ...
Mar 4, 2007 -
Re: Answering machines
Isabella to Hunter: *BEEP* That's fairly disturbing...oh, the best way to avoid the cops is get my dad to stalk you, they never take notice of that...if you'd like to ...
Mar 4, 2007 -
Re: Character Answer Game
"One of those cool shields that have a spike on one end. Protective, but dangerous." ~Isabella "I'd be one of those common objects that no one thinks are dangerous, until ...
Mar 4, 2007 -
Re: Corrupt a Wish
Granted, but it's a total rip-off, and now you're broke. I wish I was good at something that would make people take notice, and cheer fo me about (not people ...
Mar 4, 2007
