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This is amazing. It has an honest, open, emotional feel to it, and it's beautiful. I like the use of present tense - it makes the story feel more rushed, ...

*cries* Wow. This was amazing! Bad things first, good things later. You switched verb tenses A LOT. For instance, under the first asterisk, the second paragraph is in the present ...

Well, I like it. It seems like one of those pieces that leave everything up to the reader, almost like "The Lady and the Tiger." (which everyone should read, by ...

I know this is formatted a little wierdly, but it should be easier to read. It had been a very long day, and Marie was having difficulty thinking of anything ...

*sobs* my photoshop won't let me use anything but pdf images...which are pretty much non-existent... the HELP info thing said i had to use the GIF & PNG plug-ins to ...

Elizabeth--a girl who is somewhat strange, misleadingly honest, easily distracted HOLY COW SINCE WHEN ARE THERE SO MANY SMILIES? a bit mischieveous, very smart. chocolatechipmuffin

A few quick, short things to do, courtesy of the UVA Young Writer's Workshop...which I would loooooooooove to go to...

Passersby looked angry, and moved to the other side of the street, resenting the way the bright colors of those long skirts contrasted with the drab, unhappy, overall grayness of ...

This is wonderful! I'm not sure I have much to add to what's already been said, but I'll try. I'm not sure if dark-room is supposed to be hyphenated; I ...

mmmmmmmmmmmkay. I's back. Several days later. (& I knew you were Gud, Wozzel) First: piepiemann2: "overall" is one word. Not two. It has never been two. It was probably a ...

Ouch. Put the claws away. All of you. Wozzel, it could use some editing, but that's easily done. The Grammar Nazi within me begs for a pronoun at line two ...

"My greatest dream in early childhood was to marry Melantha. If you repeat that to anyone, I'll kill you. Later, my dream was, and is, to serve the Fuhrer honorably, ...

Melantha: You rule the world? Hmm. Funny how politics move so fast when you don't pay attention. Ah, well. C'est la vie. If you kill me, could you make sure ...

Makes me think of Jude Law. A lawyer, just passed the bar, very successful. Undertakes a difficult case, involving a young girl, and comes face-to-face with his own childhood, finds ...

"The enthusiasm of a woman's love is even beyond the biographer's." Jane Austen, Mansfield Park *swoon* I love you, Jane Austen! "When you have seen as much of life as ...