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chloe13

  • Short Story » General, General Re: The Fairer Side of the Sunset

    I loved this. The way you mixed comedy and tragedy was expertly done. A really heart warming story. Good work!

    Jul 27, 2011
  • Novel / Chapter » General, General Re: Shift, Chapter two

    Really good! Can they only shape shift into one animal? If so i feel sorry for that guy who was a tree . . . Anyway,this was really well written, ...

    Jul 27, 2011
  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, General Re: The Ten Nymphs

    A good first chapter! You've built up alot of mysterious tension with your character 'Blue' and i'm interested to see how she is going to develope throughout the course of ...

    Jul 27, 2011
  • Novel / Chapter » Historical Fiction, General Re: Pact of the Phoenix: Chapter 1

    I actually really enjoyed reading this first chapter. These are the kind of stories I thrive on and your writing style is fluid and enjoyable to read.A really fantastic first ...

    Jul 26, 2011
  • Short Story » Action / Adventure, General Re: What a Wonderful World.1 [deleted]

    (First Review!) You have a really great idea here, and frankly I can't wait to see where the story goes from here! The characters are likable and seem identifiable despite ...

    Jul 26, 2011


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