chloe13

Just want to say I really enjoy your writing style and that you have really great story lines. Keep up the good work. :)

Hi! Well I'm not really good at introductions, but I suppose I'll start by saying my name is Chloe,I'm a bit of a nut, I'm fifteen going on sixteen and ...

I've always really liked werewolf novels so of course I'm naturally attracted to this one. Just a couple things though,all numbers below 100 have to written in word form. so ...

I loved this. The way you mixed comedy and tragedy was expertly done. A really heart warming story. Good work!

Really good! Can they only shape shift into one animal? If so i feel sorry for that guy who was a tree . . . Anyway,this was really well written, ...

I like where you've gone with this. I pretty much agree what everyone else has said, the start didn't really have me, but then towards the end I was really ...

(Please don't be afraid to pull me up on stupid mistakes that I've made!) 2. Lee Reason, The Timid Young Fellow. Lee reason was a timid young fellow, a few ...

I really liked this! I've always found a tragic ending more emotionally powerful than a happy one! The fluid way you've written this takes the readers hand and drags them ...

All I can say is exellent!! I find myself envious of your writing style and how fluidly your dialogue flows! You definitely have a great idea here and I'll be ...

The way you've started your story with a bit of action really gets a reader in. The first impression I have of Donny is that he's going to be a ...

A good first chapter! You've built up alot of mysterious tension with your character 'Blue' and i'm interested to see how she is going to develope throughout the course of ...

(TERRIBLE GRAMMAR WARNING) 1. The passing of Gerald Farimir Gunter. Over the centuries, humans have invented various words and phrases to describe death; the black abyss, the eternal sleep from ...

I actually really enjoyed reading this first chapter. These are the kind of stories I thrive on and your writing style is fluid and enjoyable to read.A really fantastic first ...

I like where you've gone with this.I like the way you've matched the elements with their characteristic emotions, perhaps (and you don't have to listen to me) the use of ...

(First Review!) You have a really great idea here, and frankly I can't wait to see where the story goes from here! The characters are likable and seem identifiable despite ...