chloe13

Once the trawler pulled into harbour, The Stow Away disappeared like a ghost. Gabrielle found herself questioning whether the strange boy had ever existed at all. But his cool touch ...

. . .I wonder how many points livurdestiny got for that review . . . Anyway, I really like this story,and since you wrote this a year ago I'm sure ...

Wow, I don't really write that much poetry (not really my thing) but that was absolutely spectacular! This bit really hit home for me . . . Love is so ...

Excellant! Loved the rhytmic flow of everything, it made the story really enjoyable and easy to read. This really evoked emotion from me, not really sure why, I think it ...

Ah! yes, this is a problem I've often had . . friend tells me constantly! I guess I just get a bit carried away and forgot to actually make sure ...

I really like this, you should write more stuff! But I agree, you need a tad bit of work of catching the reader's attention.

I actually really like your writing style. It's cool and descriptive when it needs to be (I love the way you describe) but at times it kind of feels like ...

Great descriptive writing. I have a really clear image of what sophia looks like as a result! *sigh* typical teen flipping off his father (aren't we all guilty of similar ...

Just an old abandoned project. Tell me what you think. p.s. Fauxwind is pronounced like Foewind, why i didn't write it like that when I first did this, I do ...

I love the idea behind this, really imaginative. You've started to define the roles and relationships between the characters really effectively. I'm hoping this'll be a bit like future gladiators ...

Amazing, the chapters aren't long at all, but they say so much! Actually I like shorter chapters better, easier to read and process. NICE ONE ;)

Aaah, such beautiful and powerful imagery. You have a really lovely writing style, really discriptive, whilst readings this at times I found I could almost taste or smell what you ...

I love this, just saying. I'm kind of hoping her son is going to be some really posh pretty boy or something. Keep up the good work!

Phwaahh, I love how imaginative this is :)

Hey! Well, at the moment I'm having a go at something different to what I normally do, kind of like a dark but light hearted look into what death could ...