chloe13

All i'm saying is, God I loved this haha. Don't change anything, no matter who it may offend. Stick to the message you intended the song to portray. Good work.

I found this mesmerizing, something that most other stories on this site fail to achieve. It's hard to explain, but the way this story was told, it creates a soothing ...

Yes actually, there was a story in Skeleton Crew by Stephen King that involved characters being stranded in a desert that influenced the writing of this story. Except I think ...

I couldn't care less about grammatic and spelling corrections, I probably know what they are but just aren't bothered to look that closely into something that was just for fun. ...

Hey, feel like reviewing a drama essay? It's fine if you turn it down, I would probably turn it down too, it's just i'm really bad at picking out my ...

This is pretty boring, it's an essay I had to do for drama, so only review if you want to help me get a better mark (nit-picking pleeaseee!) anyway, try ...

I really liked this! I could see the scenario really clearly in my head and hear the characters voices! The way you made Del sound made me picture this innocently ...

Can't really find much to critique about this, so I'll just tell you that I thought this was really good! I thought the tense you used was the best part, ...

Wow, I really like your characters so far, and as stated, the death of a character leaves room for a lot of future developement, which makes me interested in future ...

Very dark and compelling. The concept of the clock is what kept me interested in the first place, but then your style of writing really drew me in (It is ...

Good job! I could hear the alien's voice really clearly in my head and see everything you were describing. But I can't help but say that there are so many ...

Haha love it :) I found it funny how dramatic this was considering the topic was ice-cream =D I actually started to salvate when you were discribing the flavours teehee ...

Overall, I thought this was really clever and interesting to read. I liked the points you made, and the way this was written; it was like I was really inside ...

Wow, I loved it. I think you should leave this as it is. There is ingenuity in simplicity with this piece of work, and it says all you need to ...

He was comfort, a wizard of the flesh and mind. I was a teenager when he first came to me. He was entertainment, and I was bored of the chemical ...