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Fantasy about another planet, similar to Earth, but somehow different. I can't really elborate more than that. Sounds sort of creepy though. The Color of Daffodils

I'd probably just smile and pretend it didn't matter, then go home and mope by myself. I'd explain my feelings to my best friend, and hope she wouldn't date him. ...

Golden: I can't have kids now that I'm dead. And I committed suicide for one woman, so why risk love again? It's not worth it to get married. Claire: Of ...

Outside of Alamo, Nevada Area 51 April 15th Black military boots pounding on the white linoleum floor, General Fredrick Saloman flashed his pass to the guards before stepping through the ...

The sunshine breaking free I like this beginning. It brings the reader in. Of cloud cover And the moon gleaming On frosty ground. That’s what you were. The candle breaking ...

Oh my gosh! I didn't think there was anyone else in the world who had a crush on Hugh Laurie, but I do, so thank you Terpsichore! I am not ...

The Dance Your simple, white dress The comma here isn't necessary. Floats in and out As you twirl with your dance partner . Your delicate face, shifts slightly to form ...

Like the moon cannot rise until the sun has set, Decent beginning. A heart cannot mend until it has been broken. Because when a broken heart is all that you ...

Lalaith Sitting by the creek, collecting my thoughts, I felt something brush my hand. Giving a start, I noticed that it was a flower. A flower that had not been ...

What happened to the ball gowns? To the the dusty aging road? To the happy, healthy children? To the message sent in code? I think "messages" would sound better. Has ...

I have the same problem with my story, because I hate writing the in-between stuff. However, you need some more boring parts, but you don't have to make them so ...

Back bent slightly This is a nice start. i like this stanza. By the weight of the world ; Hands always fisted Against life’s strong tolls . Tied up so ...

I had quite a tough time finding songs for my story, Dark Powder. It's kind of funny because the song Dead, by My Chemical Romance, works well, since all of ...

Sounds like either some sort of very sad story, about somebody dying maybe, or a thrilling adventure story in some weird country. Gold Powder

Lalaith Constance and the other elf had turned away, walking off into the forest. Watching them leave was a tall man wearing dark clothes. From what I had heard of ...