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You get your own private island, shaped like a heart, in Dubai. (That is actually possible!) -inserts coin-

I'd say long, thick dark brown hair, large dark eyes, and pale skin. Very pretty. Am I anywhere near right? (And to everyone who has guessed me, I don't have ...

You should have at least two reviews before you post your own work, but it's okay. I actually really like this. Having the stanzas almost contradict each other is a ...

This poem is rather funny, and pretty good. Not my type of poem, but not bad. The rhyming was a little too precise, and in the last stanza, you changed ...

The whole point of the trees was to show that NONE of them were in any way religious, or tied to any religion. Hence the last line of each stanza. ...

Medium-length medium brown hair, small features, and maybe colored streaks in your hair. Cute, but quirky.

This is really good! I actually like the concept of just a dragon foot. And, this might sound nitpicky, but I think the toenail on the right could be just ...

Wow. This poem is fantastic. The rhyme scheme is good, though a little odd in some places, and the message is great. I love the way you grouped the two ...

I like the message of this poem, even though it is a bit darker. I have a few nitpicks though. First off, when you say "And loving comments bounce off ...

This is really good. The rhyming gives it a nice flow, and I like the use of hyphens. There is one line that is bothering me though: "Pure change -- ...

(Yeah, this poem is kind of odd. I came up with the idea while I was walking my dog and decided to write it down. Please, critique away!) (Edited) A ...

Wow. I just felt my self esteem explode. Hehe. I'm not very good to be around when I'm over confident. You have created a monster. But thank you!!

Banned for liking scary movies.

Kind of small, with shoulder-length pale blond hair and large blue eyes. And freckles. I'm guessing kind of girly, too, boy-crazy, and very social.

Not bad. Song lyrics are always a good bet. 7/10.