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Hey Kyla Marie! I don't want to waste time going over things others have already reviewed, but I feel I must briefly mention them anyway. Like ZannaShepherd pointed out, you ...

Banned for saying someone else is banned for brackets, when they actually used parenthesis.

I'm leaving for about 8 or 9 days to go to Argentina. I think I come back next.... Thursday? Something like that.

Not bad, but also not incredible. I'm indecisive about what I think about it. 7/10

9/10 I completely agree.

Feel the mist on your skin ; The first drop begins the storm . While more will plummet You'll always remember the first , The one the fell to allow ...

Wow. This piece was really good. It had a great fantastical air to it, which wasn't overdone, and had a lot of mystery. The ending was great, because it leaves ...

There's always a love interest. :) The love interest is my second main character. :D My characters multitask. Thanks everyone! I took some of your ideas, and I think I ...

Thank you both so much! That gave me some great ideas....

You Nap in your favorite corner , Curled into a ball of linty Stuff ; 'Stuff' is such a vague word, especially in poetry, where every word matters. I'd change ...

I have a tendency, when I write, to include very few characters. I think this is probably just my way of trying to make writing simpler, but I really don't ...

Ryan watched his dad go and pressed his thumbs to his tear ducts, as if to prevent the tears from coming. He stood up and walked over to Lacy, who ...

Done! Did you want me to review both 1.2 and 1.3, or just 1.3?

They're making a GAME?? Sweet!!!!!! I love House to the ends of the Earth. I don't like the way the season ended though. It was too... confusing. Every time House ...

I wish my handwriting could be as beautiful as Meep's, or Springrain's, or Incognito's... Instead, I have this handwriting.