child_of_death

Okay first off I was raped by my dad. And to be honest this was not gonna be a poem. I was trying to rap, it looked better as a ...

The poem confused me a lot to where i did not know if you were talking about love or the nighttime. The poem seems to be forced and that makes ...

You see the thing is, I only knew the man fourteen years of my life. Sure he lost his place in my heart every now and again. But the dilemma ...

I understood your poem little too well for my own good. People say it will never happen to them, that they know how to say no and it ends like ...

This peice is very good and seems to hold more then most do. If I may, I would suggest that you CAP. more in it. Try using more periods in ...

ya i told my mom and i was jerkeds out of his home.i have been hiding behind things for ever and when i told it was like everything was better.Please ...

True about the things people do today...but we are not hippies. but your poem is really good. 1st if i was you i would change the why statments around and ...

its really good i give you that but, it seems as if you start alot of the verses with she. think of word that could correspond with it. maybe show ...

what made you write it? why do a clam voice and a roaring one??? things just pop in my head so i had to ask

that too i guess but either way i like it

this a good song... it shows how life is pure shit and we are stuck here by ourselves. now the fuck and stuff is really screaming out something.. but its ...

this a good song... it shows how life is pure shit and we are stuck here by ourselves. now the fuck and stuff is really screaming out something.. but its ...

How could you take away my soul? I was so young, and you caused me such pain. Did it make you feel more like a father? How am i to ...

can i break tha heart? can i slice tha throat? can i cause you pain? would you jump if i asked you to?could you pull the trigger?should you cut the ...