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can you pm me when you write more i really liked it it has a good mix of fantasy and real life its not just a bunch of magic and ...

i really like this kind of forbidden love I like it I hope you continue it has lots of potential

I liked it. it was different often same sex relationship stories are written from a gay perspective it was cool as I have family that are lesbian it was refreshing. ...

LOVE IT some minor typos but i loved the story it was a different and beutiful love story it was soo sweet i LOVE IT

this made me cry I now understand what my grandma went through.

OK I liked it with the characters I think you did really well letting us know what they were like and letting us into David's thought but... but what was ...

I really liked it because it was really in your face but (yes the but)at first I thought the tape was a cassette tape and couldn't figure out how it ...

i like how desciptive it is also I'm glad that you posted this it is good and left me wanting to know more and find out what happens next not ...

kewl!

[pre]written for a contest. Maria is based on my music teacher and the name Regan is from Trixie Belden My hair blew in the wind. Oh how I hated that ...

I think with the amounts of critiques that it would be pointless but I really liked the story and i want more could you maybe post more?

this is good I like it I noticed a few grammar mistakes but other that that it is really good I liked the story line. I hope you are going ...

Please write more I realy like it.

I want more what happens i love it there are a few mistakes but I think everybody else caught them. This is good thak you for posting it.

thank you every one who commented i leared a lot. Including that this is realy hard and not my thing so thanks everybody who comented and read this.