chiaro0990

Whoa! O_O This is 300 words already?! Sorry for my ignorance; I've written lot of story without counting any word-I'm lazy to count them. As for that, I'll be focusing ...

This poem is nice; the dennotation is very clear that we completely understand what you're trying to say, and the simplicity of your construction makes the feeling a little bit ...

This one is good; I like it. The way you used your imagery has created an incerdible feeling towards to the readers. So far, I've recently learned something about poetry: ...

I like this one because the poem is simple, and yet so powerful. :D However, there was a little problem with your poetry...I can't figure out what, but I think ...

"Panic", says my mind. "Stay calm", I whisper back. Talking to himself, huh. Even though I know the signs, I'm still numb from previous attacks. First things first, when you ...

I'll only give you critique in some part because I'm not feeling well. A heavy heartbeat of horror Hmm, It's true this line must be apart to the next stanza ...

I see you have problems with punctuation because you mostly used hyphen rather than commas, which it's the most common use in poetry. You're only gonna use hyphen if you ...

If you wanna know what kind of poem is this, obviously it's a blank verse cause you didn't set any rhythm at all. Anyway, let's proceed to your poem. PS. ...