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"Panic", says my mind. "Stay calm", I whisper back. Talking to himself, huh. Even though I know the signs, I'm still numb from previous attacks. First things first, when you ...

This is my worst poem I've ever done. I forfeit the concrete images for the sake of rhythm? whatever, I just did it with fun. Tired, tired, and tired when ...

Hmm, you're good with this. I like how you've written the poem, lovely indeed. In my opinion, I think it's better to combine all of the stanza into one to ...

@keekers: Oh, that explains everything. Well, I can only say one thing, write on!

@Jennya: actually, the arrangement of this poem has no meaning at all. I tend to arrange like that to create an ambiguity, that's what I've read in the internet.

I'll only give you critique in some part because I'm not feeling well. A heavy heartbeat of horror Hmm, It's true this line must be apart to the next stanza ...

I see you have problems with punctuation because you mostly used hyphen rather than commas, which it's the most common use in poetry. You're only gonna use hyphen if you ...

If you wanna know what kind of poem is this, obviously it's a blank verse cause you didn't set any rhythm at all. Anyway, let's proceed to your poem. PS. ...

Sorry for the delay respond; I had forgotten to check this thread. Anyways, thank you for your lovely opinion. I guess I only need support from someone else. XD I'll ...

             Summer fall        white tinted clouds  flourish icy tears Binds by a wind         in orange seaming-sun pine trees sprout ...

Hi everyone. I've just joined here at Young Writers Society, and I need help from someone who would help me at making a good stories and a poetry. To explain ...