chiaro0990

I like your topic, however the examples are too simple. Can you give me an example that you usually see in other books?

Well, I removed the punctuation at the end of the line because someone had told me that line breaks have the same purpose as the punctuation. And somehow, putting too ...

I made this poetry out of boredom. You might spot some lines that are off, or some stale words. Sorry about that, my mind does not work properly these past ...

I know I'm not making any sense, but I'm not giving any attention to the thoughts of my poem, so bear with me. For poets out there, I really need ...

Uhmm, I really don't how to explain myself with drawings. Most artist in deviantArt prefered to explain it with pictures, pointing out on what spot that you need to work ...

Whoa! O_O This is 300 words already?! Sorry for my ignorance; I've written lot of story without counting any word-I'm lazy to count them. As for that, I'll be focusing ...

Excuse me for my rudeness. I don't think there are grammatical errors you were suggesting about my poetry. Instead, you were trying to say was: they seemed awkward that it ...

This poem is nice; the dennotation is very clear that we completely understand what you're trying to say, and the simplicity of your construction makes the feeling a little bit ...

Please read the spoiler before you give me a review. Please answer the following questions to help me improve my poetic skills 1. Did you spot some stale words in ...

This one is good; I like it. The way you used your imagery has created an incerdible feeling towards to the readers. So far, I've recently learned something about poetry: ...

I like this one. I can somehow relate everything you said in this poem...very good indeed. Not only that, you easily transfer an emotional feeling as we read your poetry, ...

I like this one because the poem is simple, and yet so powerful. :D However, there was a little problem with your poetry...I can't figure out what, but I think ...

This is great and good! I like your style in writing. :D

Can you guys give me a clear definition of juxtaposition, and some example? I can't seem to get the meaning in the internet. Thank you so much for your help.

This is what I call "poetry." You have engage imagery in every line, which I like it the most, and you simply embrace the rhymic tone and an incredible feeling. ...