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Thank you, and I agree about my lack of punctuation... how ever, I have a small problem. How do you create stanzas on an I pad?

Thank you so much! I am happy for the critisism and I shall go fix some of these errors.

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Greetings dracula, I must say your poem is a beautiful piece of liturature. I am find of the way you use references to actual mythology in your poem for it ...

Thanks for the review and for pointing out my errors! I shall try to respond to most reviews that come my way, and I fixed some of the problems you ...

Greetings, this is my first written work on YWS so I hope you like it!

This is rather good,but I do not entirely understand it all.