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Hi there! I absolutely love this poem! I think that it covers a difficult topic perfectly. A lost love... Trying to find yourself... Understand and share how it feels... It's ...

This is one of the first poems that I have it's a bit short.. Hope you guys like it! :) Is that why I never got the truth? Is that ...

Wow! I didn't really know what to think while I was reading this, but it's really good! I really loved the last bit though, Fair is foul, and foul is ...

Hey! I thought that this poem was really cool, I've never read a poem made out of haiku! I think sparkling can be read different ways even if there is ...

Ahh! I loved this piece! I thought it pulled the more sad tone with a hint of resentment (maybe?) very well!I I feel that I know kind of what you ...

So...I got bored on a car ride a few weeks ago and remembered a time from last summer... this was the result. :D Days go speeding by. A blur of ...

Hi there! I thought this was a lovely piece! I had a bit of a hard time following it though, like it jumped a little. The best part, I thought, ...

Hi! I thought that this piece was beautiful. :) The descriptions easily painted a picture and showed the emotions of the soldier perfectly! The part to say where he is ...

Hi! Like creativityrules, I didn't read the spoiler until was through reading the poem, which was dark but lovely. I really do wish the best for you. The only thing ...

I absolutely loved this poem!! It is shows the innocence of the little boy and shows how much he looks to his grandfather (or grandmother?). It's such good writing!! I ...

Agreeing with Socks here! "Knowledge is power, power is fear." I LOVE that line!! Darker writing is always more moving, at least in what I have read. All the little ...

I thought that the comparison between a man and a puppet was very original and neat! I loved the wording used to describe the smaller details! The only two mistakes ...

I thought that this is a lovely poem, reflecting the view from one watching the crow. I did not see anything to change other than a few commas where the ...

Hi! I thought that this poem had an enormous amount of meaning to it! I loved the picture it painted in my mind. There would be only one thing I ...

Hi there! This is one of my favorite poems now!! I know many people have this same opinion but they do not know how to put it into words, (I've ...