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Re: At Night
I think this is the most repetitive poem I have ever written(x I'm not too sure that I like it.. haha tell me what you guys think! At night I ...
Jan 11, 2012 -
Re: The Silent Dancer
Twirling, Spinning, Dancing slowly, In a silent room. Dizzy from her ever-present perfume. Watching her sail through the air, While swaying in the wooden rocking chair. Calling out to her ...
Jan 8, 2012 -
Re: Necessary Evil
Hello there! Did you really write this in ten-ish minutes?! It is really very good! I think my favourite part is the very beginning and the end, it just brought ...
Jan 7, 2012 -
Re: Rate the Signature Above You [4]
8/10 :)
Jan 2, 2012 -
Re: What are you listening to at the moment? [2]
Dear God by Avenged Sevenfold (:
Jan 2, 2012 -
Re: Just a Bit Late
So this is very rough because I literally just wrote this. Tear it apart! XD Stepping closer... Nearer and nearer to the edge. Darkness lapping out of the endless void. ...
Jan 1, 2012 -
Re: Stop the World, I Want to Get Off
Hi! I thought that this was lovely, and if you hadn't said you were new to poetry, I never would have guessed it(: I didn't see anything wrong with the ...
Dec 25, 2011 -
Re: Official Christmas Poetry Contest Entries
so I'm entering this using image #2 :)
Dec 24, 2011 -
Re: Merry Christmas, My Dear
Hearing laughter echo, Just out of my reach; In lonely solitude, On a snowy beach. When will you come, And see me here? I wait for the time, When you ...
Dec 19, 2011 -
Re: faith
The pattern in the bottom right is actually onion skin cells.. I ran out of ideas XD
Dec 18, 2011 -
Re: faith
A piece of my zentangle drawings.. any thoughts (other than how bad the photo quality is) ? :) and yeah.. this is my first try uploading a picture XD
Dec 18, 2011 -
Re: Black Marbles In Your Eyes
Hi! I really enjoyed this poem! It's so pretty! A bit confusing at times, but it was lovely. I would go through it and look for things that could be ...
Dec 15, 2011 -
Re: Is it You?
So I write at the most random times... this poem kinda came to mind in the middle of sacraments class for absolutely no reason! It's not my best writing and ...
Dec 10, 2011 -
Re: That's So Gay!
Hiya! Agreeing with Arryn, I thought it brings up tough topics and then questions them which I really liked about the poem.. I really did not see anything to change ...
Dec 3, 2011 -
Re: Utopia.
Hiya! I thought that your poem is very unique and pretty.. But I couldn't follow it. It's probably just me needing to reread it again. I like the varying vocabulary, ...
Dec 3, 2011
