chewy66

Thank you for the advice i think i know what you mean about jack and the police calling you ask your self why are the police calling him in the ...

no dont be sorry thank you for being "harsh" now i know and its hopefully a little bit better now i realy dont know what im doing truthfully im just ...

good stuff i want to read more some little mistakes that could be fixed by proof reading other then that its great

its a cute little thing i liked it just a little confuseing at first probably cus its so late :)

its realy good the only thing ide do differnt is watch the wording some of the words are kinda mixed up like they dont belong or are not a part ...