chetanbhasin

The story starts with beginning of man And the journey begins when his mind ran. He is fast on his path as extreme speed of a car. In his way ...

Greetings I'm LastPaladin and firstly don't spit in the face of reviewers, secondly they waste valuable time to review this, so treat them with courtesy. Now on with review. You ...

@Everyone I understand what you people are saying about the first stanza and that I should expand the poem and answer the question and I also know about this but ...

This story seems a little awkward, I like the idea but the way some sentences fit together was just confusing and random. Hope you keep trying and good luck :) ...

Hello bookgeek, However, your plot and idea is nice but there are some general mistakes. I am editing it and my edits and suggestions are in bold. Dear Dad, How ...

Hi! You've got a great sense of expressions which you explained well in your story. But in the starting and on some other places your words seem like changing into ...

Is this the empty paper I was looking for? Long awaited day that I was dreaming of. Is this where I wanted to be once? Fighting every bullet of each ...

Thank you everybody you helped me a lot on this story. Thank you very much, really I never thought that I would get this much help. @shubhiloves2write: You were not ...

57 years ago, he was really happy with the news that his wife was going to give birth to his child. He was young then. That is what people told ...