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Hi there skins! It is Chetan here. You have got a very good story here. I see it had been running for a long time, I just saw it and ...

Hey! Once again, I loved this one but there are a few things that I figured out in this part. "Oh, gentelman, who's this?" He asks Anotnio and Mark with ...

Hiya! This is Chetan Again. Once again, I am here to review your work. First of all, you are using short form of words here. Like you are using "Who ...

Hi Kay! This is Chetan here, and I have something to say about your work here. As Lava told in a review on the previous chapter, your chapters are very ...

Okay everybody! So I've edited this chapter for the first time, what do you think? Is it better than before, I had some changes in dialog and I added some ...

Hi! Sorry for being late in this review but I had to do a lot of work in no time. So let us begin with this. I'm not good at ...

Hey! Thanks for the review Trish. I figured out most of the mistakes before I posted this chapter but I didn't rectified them because I didn't know how. But the ...

Hi there! Thanks for your review on my work, I thought of having a look at your work which I think is great. So, I will be reviewing you today, ...

Hi! I liked this one, but don't you think it would be better if you expand it. I don't say that you expand it on cost of loosing the meaning ...

Wow! That was great I have to say. I really liked it, especially the first stanza. You've really explained your points well without loosing the rhyme and flow of your ...

I would love to have a review from you on my work, How difficult life could be Have a look please!

Heya! This is Chetan here. Can you pleas review my work, How difficult life could be ! Will be thankful to you. As you told above, you are interested in ...

Would you like have a look at this one: How difficult life could be It is an adventure story!

Thanks a lot EliteHusky, I will have a look on this chapter once again and try proofreading it myself. However, I would like my reviewers to help me with this. ...

@EliteHusky, Hey! Thanks for the review, the way you looked at this chapter I got some more ideas about it. But I have to go school now, so I will ...