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R=reliable quality O=omasing s=suspenseful s=supirior writing skill another great post

um... a good story, a little out of place but it is fan fiction. the story does flow but moves a little too fast the combination of the songs is ...

please review and help me make better chapter to come

chapter 1 Laser fire on the left, laser fire on the right. This was going to be tricky I thought to my self as I was cornered behind the wreckage ...