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  • Action/Adventure Novels Re: Chapter 3 of Bloody Canvas

    R=reliable quality O=omasing s=suspenseful s=supirior writing skill another great post

    May 7, 2008
  • Fanfiction Novels Re: Harry/Hermione Fanfiction Chap. 1

    um... a good story, a little out of place but it is fan fiction. the story does flow but moves a little too fast the combination of the songs is ...

    May 7, 2008
  • Fanfiction Short Stories Re: Star Wars

    please review and help me make better chapter to come

    May 7, 2008
  • Fanfiction Short Stories Re: Star Wars

    chapter 1 Laser fire on the left, laser fire on the right. This was going to be tricky I thought to my self as I was cornered behind the wreckage ...

    May 7, 2008


In a hole in the ground there lived a hobbit. Not a nasty, dirty, wet hole, filled with the ends of worms and an oozy smell, nor yet a dry, bare, sandy hole with nothing in it to sit down on or to eat: it was a hobbit-hole, and that means comfort.
— JRR Tolkien