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Hi Rosey! Thank you so much for reading and reviewing! Your critique is very helpful. ~Cheer

Thanks Jos! I always make accidently errors like that. Luckily it will be easy to fix :) I will try to stick to it! Thank you so much for reading ...

Hi Fire! Thanks for catching those mistakes! I'll fix those up right now! ~Cheer

Hi meandbooks! I love your username! Yes, this will be a novel! I was debating on which tense to use and I'll fix that. Her sister is always throwing up ...

Hi Carmenblue! I'll fix that! And yes! I am planning out a novel and this is just the very beginning of the first chapter. Thank you so much for reading ...

Hi Stella! I'm so sorry for all the errors! I was in a rush to post this because I had errands to do. I will fix them as soon as ...

Hello Valdez! Yes, I see what you mean. I will add more description and work on that! Thank you so much for reading! ~Cheer

Wow, thank you so much! This advice is really helpful. There's actually a few chapters before this one that says the character's name and what the situation is. I will ...

Thank you so much! :D I will work on my wording and try to slow this downs a bit. Thanks for reading DarkHeart!

Thank you so much for your feedback :D Yes, in this portion of my novel, it doesn't really explain the relationship between them. In another piece of my work, it ...