chazbc4

This is a very well written story, especially considering you're only thirteen! I liked the development of the characters relationships through the dream, and even think that Lindsay's story could ...

Okay, as I said before, I'm reading from the beginning- and it's so close to perfect that I can't help myself! - "King Karitas was kind, and showed compassion to ...

Hello :) Considering your age, this is pretty good - and it seems like you have an interesting storyline going. Summer, in this first chapter, appears to be the type ...

Ah, I'm doing this review for the 'review the one above you thing', but I have so little time that although I've read the whole of this chapter, I feel ...