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A Shadowy Future A grey aged wolf trotted across a snowy valley. The only sound heard was the crunching of snow under her padded paws. Her wary eyes watched everything ...

What am I? If I’m in the presence of light, I may blind if you look too closely, If I am thrown into the bright flames of the sun, I ...

Prologue “Goneck, although I am sure that you have thought over it many times, I am inclined to ask of you whether you acknowledge and are aware of the dangers ...

1. Sixteen Years of Confinement Nami leaned against the spotless window pane, gazing outside at the immaculate and beautiful garden, full of flowers which were organized into designs which were ...

The Start of the Game It was the hair. The first time I saw him was when I was walking through the hall early in the morning with my friend ...

Rule 1: Know yourself. Now I know that I wasn’t the most attractive girl in school. That was for sure. Unlike my sister, I was just an ordinary fourteen, soon ...

Rule 2: Make a good first impression. I walked into school the next morning with a bounce in my step and a large smile plastered on my face. As I ...

2. The Appearance of a Long Lost Past Nami and Helena had done well this time but Nami wasn’t sure how well she would do the next time she did ...

3. Preparing for the Journey After Nami had snuck breakfast for Goneck into the barn she ran into her room. Helena was sitting on her bed anxiously waiting for her. ...

Continuation... Nami knew that arguing would only make things worse so she followed without resisting him. All the house servants watched with curiosity as he pulled her up to the ...

It was dark all around but Nami knew the way. She slid forward a couple more steps until she reached the candle that she had used so many times years ...

4. Jord The boy opened his eyes and saw a girl and a pup staring down at him. He sat up with a start and looked frightened. He was sitting ...

5. Rovenhold As they neared the entrance Goneck laid out their plan. “I am going to follow you guys in like I am your dog, you, Nami, are going to ...

Not that many changes. You can probably spot them if you scan through. I've also added a couple sentences. Have fun! And please give me as much critques as you ...

3. Preparing for the Journey After Nami had snuck breakfast for Goneck into the barn she ran into her room. Helena was sitting on her bed anxiously waiting for her. ...

continuation... The tunnel held an eerie feeling and the air was strangely still. Helena held the candle high over her head as they continued on. Her usually quick-paced and light ...

continuation... “Thomas!” Nami cried out, looking panic stricken. She had completely forgotten. Poor Thomas. I made him believe that I was really going to go. He will be so upset. ...

7. Tradhalem Tradhalem was much bigger than Rovenhold and metal barred gates surrounded the city, but besides that Tradhalem was a quite beautiful city. Grass was left to flourish in ...

8. Rhutherum Nimbus Hart barged into Nami’s room and yelled, “Come look at this!” and rushed outside as fast as she had come. Nami woke with a start. She looked ...

9. Lessons of Medicine Nami bit into a slice of fresh sweet smelling bread which had just come out of the small mud oven. The smell of the food made ...

Hello! This is just a short story i wrote from inspriation. I don't think I'll be continuing it though. But still please critique and give me your thoughts and opinions!! ...

Pt. 2 I watched as she slammed the door behind her. Hypocrite, I smirked. I took out my brushes and acrylic paints. If anyone was going to win this competition, ...

Pt. 3 He led me outside. It was cold and I could see my breath in the air. The noise from the pub was blocked out by the shut door. ...