charleslee

Hi, thanks for reviewing! I have been working on this story quite a bit lately (though I haven't updated it on here in quite some time) and I decided to ...

Ah, I see what you're saying there. Fortunately I'm not particularly attached to that section, but I needed something to a) separate the two Malachi sections and b) reveal a ...

Thanks for the review! I'm glad you mentioned the alcohol/poison thing because originally it had been "Hawthorn had poisoned himself" but I didn't quite like the bluntness and boring-ness of ...

Oh, I hope that last sentence didn't sound like I was being sarcastic, just meaning that I'd love you to review it but no pressure of course! :)

Thanks so much for reviewing! I really liked your suggestions and will be editing to include some of them soon. I hope you like Chapter 1 if you get around ...

That makes sense. I'll get to work on that. And let me know if you have anything you'd like reviewed also, I really appreciated all your feedback! Just posted 2.2 ...

Hi, thanks a lot for the review! I'm a bit torn because I think making everything seem eerier than it already is would make it far too obvious that a ...

Hey, thanks so much for the review! I've been taking a break from writing because life has been pretty busy, but I'm starting to get some inspiration again and logged ...

Hey, glad you liked it! I'd be happy to review your story when I get the chance, but it wouldn't get you any points--you have to be the one to ...

Hey, thanks for the review! I've actually thought about the prologue thing before and might change this to a Chapter 1, but I'm still debating so that helps! Anyway, I'm ...

Hey, thanks so much! I'll be working to improve the areas you commented on. -C

Thank you! Will be working on that

Hey, thanks for the review! I'm glad you enjoyed it and thanks for all the kind words. Will be sure to check out some of your work. I really liked ...

Hey, saw your comment and I just finished a second read-through. I think that it has improved a lot since my first review. There was a lot more internal conflict ...

Made a couple of revisions, but not a whole lot. I really have a hard time making big changes all at once but know it's all for the better! Could ...