chaplin90

ok i'll do that right away!

Yes I agree with what you've said and I think that some of the errors I have made are just spelling, not my strong point, but thank you for reading ...

Yeah thanks I agree with you I think when the time comes to revise it I'll definitely use your suggestions, thanks for reading!

Very nice I really like those lyrics and I would love to hear it as a song. Hard to fault it as it seems very meaningful and highly interesting, very ...